| tornit 发表于 2009-2-17 07:18 全显示 1楼 |
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This excellent short story is really very touching in the sense it describes successfully the traumatic and sorrowful feelings of the character when he knows he is going to lose his parter for ever. I like especially the ending few sentences which have very strong poetic sad touches. A wonderful writing. (It seems many responses in this forum like to pick the mistakes of the writer instead of posting genuine appreciations or comments. Personally I think it is better to show their encouragements before picking out the mistakes of the writer. This will do harm to discourage the writer at all.) |
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